Edgy goth chick's musings about being defiled and bred by the Deep Ones.. Commendable (cos my favorite kind of vore morsels are SuicideGirlslike), but at the end rather pathetic attempt at whorror...
This is great. I really how this game slowly moves you through an experience, not giving you any sense of up or down. And through time and reading you discover what is happening, why it's happening, who it's happening to and for. It's a mesmerizing experience, both visually and textually, that pulls you to a place you might not expect. Good stuff!
Feelings on this are mixed - the poetry is sometimes gratingly verbose, but the imagery depicted is a vivid treat for my mind's eye. Not too proud to admit that some of the terminology was unfamiliar to me, but I think I kept up with the narrative, mostly. What I understood of it was dark, and erotic, and indulgently self-destructive.
Feels like good art should; lingers with me and stimulates my mind in weird and interesting ways.
Now, I may be a bit biased, but practically anything Lovecrafty/eldritch horror gets big points from me, but this was really rad. It meshes well with Lovecraft lore, very otherworldy and unknowable, and really just gross. I really vibe with the way you told this story too. Very akin to Lovecrafts sometimes obnoxiously flowery writing, it just really set the scene nicely. Congrats on your first game!
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Edgy goth chick's musings about being defiled and bred by the Deep Ones.. Commendable (cos my favorite kind of vore morsels are SuicideGirlslike), but at the end rather pathetic attempt at whorror...
This is great. I really how this game slowly moves you through an experience, not giving you any sense of up or down. And through time and reading you discover what is happening, why it's happening, who it's happening to and for. It's a mesmerizing experience, both visually and textually, that pulls you to a place you might not expect. Good stuff!
Feelings on this are mixed - the poetry is sometimes gratingly verbose, but the imagery depicted is a vivid treat for my mind's eye. Not too proud to admit that some of the terminology was unfamiliar to me, but I think I kept up with the narrative, mostly. What I understood of it was dark, and erotic, and indulgently self-destructive.
Feels like good art should; lingers with me and stimulates my mind in weird and interesting ways.
I didn't realize my love for Lovecrafty/eldritch until I was introduced to this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and the world.
I have described this as sexy in a gross way.
Ay, thanks for checking it out, man! You're right, though, lol. I'm a slut for big fancy words, and interjecting them when I can.
Ha! I like you; keep doing what you're doing.
Now, I may be a bit biased, but practically anything Lovecrafty/eldritch horror gets big points from me, but this was really rad. It meshes well with Lovecraft lore, very otherworldy and unknowable, and really just gross. I really vibe with the way you told this story too. Very akin to Lovecrafts sometimes obnoxiously flowery writing, it just really set the scene nicely. Congrats on your first game!
Shuckss, thank you so much 🌙